Eighth Assignment Of Writing 3 (Expository Paragraph)

EXPOSITORY PARAGRAPH

TOPIC            : WHY STUDENTS DO COPY PAST

TITLE`            : HOW STUDENTS’ COPY –PASTE PHENOMENON HAPPEN

“How Students’ Copy –Paste Phenomenon Happen”

In this modern era, technology is more complex. Moreover, nowadays the information and the technology such as internet which is provide us to get more information that we want easily. Unfortunately, the advance of information and technology precisely break down Indonesia’s education. In a fact, there are many students that finish their assignment by doing copy-paste on the internet. They think that this way will easier for them to finish their assignment. Whereas, this is a virus which may broke the teenagers in this country. Moreover, it becomes one of culture in education of Indonesia.

This behavior, always develop year by year in teenager especially for students. Copy-paste activity or usually called as “Plagiarism” is actually something bad which have to avoided by us for a better behavior. The main factor of this case is computer. If we talk about computer, copy-paste seems as a usual thing. But actually, it does not have any relation with education at school because it can influence the students. Most of people expect that the plagiarism of the students is the common activity. But remember, if we look for it further, the result will show not only the doers which lose out but also the victims of it.

 We often found the students come to the internet shop to do the assignments that given by the teacher. For example, they are assigned to make a script speech, and then they are looking for the example about it on the internet. When they have found it, they copy it then print out. As the result, the assignment finishes in fast without make by their-selves. This activity is not only happen at the junior high school or senior high school but also in the undergraduate students. That is all the copy paste phenomenon or plagiarism currently happened.  Ironically, they do it consciously when their real duty is to create something which improved their abilities and self-confidence. What will happen to our country in the future if this condition happened continuously?

Another question is “why students do copy paste?” There are many reasons that suppose someone do that. First, they do in order to finish their assignment from the teacher easily and faster, because there are so many assignments that given by teacher to them.  Furthermore, in their mind described that writing will not read seriously by their teacher. They think teacher have no time to check it. Their mind-set is “The important one is they submit their assignment”. Second, they don’t have enough capability to do it by their own mind. They don’t have any idea in their mind to do their assignment. So, “copy paste” is the best choice to save their score. Third, they are lazy to think or to write. They think that everything will be fine because they can copy paste anything in internet freely. It includes their assignment. Fourth, they are in hurry condition, they forget to do the assignments. It is also to minimize their time and energy. Fifth, Copy paste is easier than make by their self because It is instant way. It will spend many times if they do by their self. Sixth, Deadline of assignment. Usually the deadline is on the top of them, so that they just make it faster. Seventh, they just follow their friends who do so. At their mind, “Why do I have to make it by my own, if I can search it easily? Don’t my friends do it at the same?”

Last but not least, to change bad habit of students in copy paste need serious treatments. Of course, we may start from ourselves. Just cross our heart that we will not do copy paste in our daily activity and believe that we can do it by our own capability. In conclusion, as a good student, we have to understand well that this is as a bad habit which may break our future and culture.

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§      Opening         : 334 words

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SEVENTH ASSIGNMENT OF WRITING 3 (DESCRIPTIVE TEXT)

DESCRIPTIVE PHARAGRAPH

TOPIC              : Someone You Admire
TITLE               : My Guardian Star

MY GUARDIAN STAR

I do believe that everyone has someone admire in their life, so do I. Sometimes someone admire can be the inspire person in our life. They can motivate us to do good things and change us to be better and better again. Moreover, someone admire is like a light, shining up in the middle of the night. In short, it can make our life full of spirit and more meaningful. Someone I admire in my life is a beautiful woman in the world which I call “My Guardian Star”. Her name is Aminatu Zuhriyah. She is my lovely mother.

I like her from two sides, her physical and her personality. The first is her physical. She is very beautiful. She has a big body. She does not look so tall nor does too short but medium in height. Then, she has round face with pointed nose. On her lips are sensual shapes making everyone arouses. Her eyes are round and black. She has black long wavy hair. Her skin is yellow creamy.

The second one is her personalities. She is a kind person. She always wants to help someone who needs a help. She did all of that things without any rewords and never see one side of human being although she is not in a good condition. She is a most patient person I ever meet in this world. She passes the obstacle from the God with a thousand smiles. Something that’s always in her mind is “God never gives impossible obstacles for His servants”. She is fair person. She treats her children with the same way. She never plays favorites. As a result, her children love her very much and always obey to her. She is economical person. She is able to manage finance of our family well. She knows which thing is need to her family and which thing is not. It does not mean she is stingy.  She is friendly person. Not only to her close friends but also to someone she does not know before. In short, she is friendly to everyone.

In conclusion, she is perfect person in my eyes. I hope someday I able to be like her in whole. A woman who has good personalities, can be a good wife and a good mother. For these reasons, I love her from the bottom of my heart and My Guardian Star is always mine.

---Tika Fatmawati---
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IDENTIFICATION (Opening)	I do believe that everyone has someone admire in their life, so do I. Sometimes someone admire can be the inspire person in our life. They can motivate us to do good things and change us to be better and better again. Moreover, someone admire is like a light, shining up in the middle of the night. In short, it can make our life full of spirit and more meaningful. Someone I admire in my life is a beautiful woman in the world which I call “My Guardian Star”. Her name is Aminatu Zuhriyah. She is my lovely mother. (99 words)
DESCRIPTION (Content)	I like her from two sides, her physical and her personality. The first is her physical. She is very beautiful. She has a big body. She does not look so tall nor does too short but medium in height. Then, she has round face with pointed nose. On her lips are sensual shapes making everyone arouses. Her eyes are round and black. She has black long wavy hair. Her skin is yellow creamy. The second one is her personalities. She is a kind person. She always wants to help someone who needs a help. She did all of that things without any rewords and never see one side of human being although she is not in a good condition. She is a most patient person I ever meet in this world. She passes the obstacle from the God with a thousand smiles. Something that’s always in her mind is “God never gives impossible obstacles for His servants”. She is fair person. She treats her children with the same way. She never plays favorites. As a result, her children love her very much and always obey to her. She is economical person. She is able to manage finance of our family well. She knows which thing is need to her family and which thing is not. It does not mean she is stingy.  She is friendly person. Not only to her close friends but also to someone she does not know before. In short, she is friendly to everyone. (248 words)
CONCLUSION (Closing)	In conclusion, she is perfect person in my eyes. I hope someday I able to be like her in whole. A woman who has good personalities, can be a good wife and a good mother. For these reasons, I love her from the bottom of my heart and My Guardian Star is always mine. (54 words)

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§      Opening            : 99 words

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Sixth Assignment of Writing 3 Course

"NARRATIVE PARAGRAPH"

Topic   : The Hardest Thing I Have to Do

Title     : The Reason

“THE REASON”

Everybody has their own experiences in their life. They dedicated their life for their own reasons. Even the reasons were not they, themselves. So was I with my own experiences that I dedicated with my life, that what I called as “the hardest thing I have to do”. The hardest thing I have to do in my life was when I went to Malaysia as employer in one of computer software factory. The reasons why I went there was because I have to continue my study at university.  “Oh god, how could it happen to me? When all of my friends enjoy their blessing with their family and continue their study, why I should look for money to fulfill my necessary? Is that my parent obligation is not it”, My heart screamed. But I realized that was the best for me and my family.

 

Four years ago, after I graduated from senior high school, I looked for a job which is placed in aboard, yes, aboard was my choice. Because the salary was bigger than any jobs in Indonesia, that why I choose a job at aboard, Malaysia. I registered myself to CV. Mitra Muda Raksa Mandiri as an employer. I departed to Malaysia a week after the day of registration, I accompanied by fifteen employer from my district.

At the first day, I felt homesick. I was afraid, like a stranger because it was my first time where in a place which is so far away from my home. But I said to myself; “You have to survive Tika, keep on this way, this is for your better future”. Day by day passed, I felt that my job was too hard for me, as a girl.  I had to arrive at manufacture at 7 A.M and back home at 7 P.M, that were the hardest hours I ever had, beside that I just stood up every hours in my job. It was really hard for me. But one more, my family and my study were still strong enough pushed me up at that condition.

Finally,  I found a little piece of happiness in my job and I started enjoy my daily work, I spent two years there and I decided to back home, because I felt that I have enough supplies for prepare my study. Yes, that was the hardest thing that I have to do in my life so far. Perhaps, everything was look like bad at the first time, but someday soon you will understand which one is the best for your life.

Tika Fatmawati

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Total words usage are 426 words.

Opening : 144 words

Contents: 201 words

Closing : 82 words