SEVENTH ASSIGNMENT OF WRITING 3 (DESCRIPTIVE TEXT)

DESCRIPTIVE PHARAGRAPH

TOPIC              : Someone You Admire
TITLE               : My Guardian Star

MY GUARDIAN STAR

I do believe that everyone has someone admire in their life, so do I. Sometimes someone admire can be the inspire person in our life. They can motivate us to do good things and change us to be better and better again. Moreover, someone admire is like a light, shining up in the middle of the night. In short, it can make our life full of spirit and more meaningful. Someone I admire in my life is a beautiful woman in the world which I call “My Guardian Star”. Her name is Aminatu Zuhriyah. She is my lovely mother.

I like her from two sides, her physical and her personality. The first is her physical. She is very beautiful. She has a big body. She does not look so tall nor does too short but medium in height. Then, she has round face with pointed nose. On her lips are sensual shapes making everyone arouses. Her eyes are round and black. She has black long wavy hair. Her skin is yellow creamy.

The second one is her personalities. She is a kind person. She always wants to help someone who needs a help. She did all of that things without any rewords and never see one side of human being although she is not in a good condition. She is a most patient person I ever meet in this world. She passes the obstacle from the God with a thousand smiles. Something that’s always in her mind is “God never gives impossible obstacles for His servants”. She is fair person. She treats her children with the same way. She never plays favorites. As a result, her children love her very much and always obey to her. She is economical person. She is able to manage finance of our family well. She knows which thing is need to her family and which thing is not. It does not mean she is stingy.  She is friendly person. Not only to her close friends but also to someone she does not know before. In short, she is friendly to everyone.

In conclusion, she is perfect person in my eyes. I hope someday I able to be like her in whole. A woman who has good personalities, can be a good wife and a good mother. For these reasons, I love her from the bottom of my heart and My Guardian Star is always mine.

---Tika Fatmawati---
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GENERIC STRUCTURES	TEXT
IDENTIFICATION (Opening)	I do believe that everyone has someone admire in their life, so do I. Sometimes someone admire can be the inspire person in our life. They can motivate us to do good things and change us to be better and better again. Moreover, someone admire is like a light, shining up in the middle of the night. In short, it can make our life full of spirit and more meaningful. Someone I admire in my life is a beautiful woman in the world which I call “My Guardian Star”. Her name is Aminatu Zuhriyah. She is my lovely mother. (99 words)
DESCRIPTION (Content)	I like her from two sides, her physical and her personality. The first is her physical. She is very beautiful. She has a big body. She does not look so tall nor does too short but medium in height. Then, she has round face with pointed nose. On her lips are sensual shapes making everyone arouses. Her eyes are round and black. She has black long wavy hair. Her skin is yellow creamy. The second one is her personalities. She is a kind person. She always wants to help someone who needs a help. She did all of that things without any rewords and never see one side of human being although she is not in a good condition. She is a most patient person I ever meet in this world. She passes the obstacle from the God with a thousand smiles. Something that’s always in her mind is “God never gives impossible obstacles for His servants”. She is fair person. She treats her children with the same way. She never plays favorites. As a result, her children love her very much and always obey to her. She is economical person. She is able to manage finance of our family well. She knows which thing is need to her family and which thing is not. It does not mean she is stingy.  She is friendly person. Not only to her close friends but also to someone she does not know before. In short, she is friendly to everyone. (248 words)
CONCLUSION (Closing)	In conclusion, she is perfect person in my eyes. I hope someday I able to be like her in whole. A woman who has good personalities, can be a good wife and a good mother. For these reasons, I love her from the bottom of my heart and My Guardian Star is always mine. (54 words)

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§      Opening            : 99 words

§      Content             : 248 words

§      Closing             : 54 words

§      Total                 : 401 words