WRITING TASK 4 (IDENTIFYING NARRATIVE PARAGRAPH)

“The purpose of this writing is to inform the people that never give up to rich dreams. Always believe that when there is a will there is a way. This writing is about my great experience to catch my dream.”

“A STORY OF A GIRL WHO CATCH A DREAM”

Three years ago in a beautiful village, lived a family who love each other. They had been living together for a long time and had two children. Their first children was me, Tika Fatmawati and their second child was Muvid Angger Frantio. Muvid was spoiled child but smart boy. While their other child, I was cranky but diligent. A beautiful girl who has many dreams and never give up to rich all the dreams.

At that time, Muvid was third grade in Elementary school and I was third grade in Senior High school. Muvid want to continue his study in a boarding school, while I wanted to continue my study at university. On other hand, our parent did not have enough money to pay the payment. As a result, Muvid continued his study at boarding school as his dream; meanwhile I stayed at home while prayed to God to give luck to my parent, so I could rich my dream to continue my study at university. I was sad, because I didn’t get what I want, but I believe that God had plan for me.

One day, I heard there was a good job in abroad which had good salary for two years. I interested about it. I thought that I would not get anything if I only stayed at home, it would be best if I looked a job. I said to my parent directly. Unfortunately, my mother did not agree to my plan.” You are a girl. It is danger for you to go to abroad, I just worry about your safety” my mother said wisely. But I never give up trying persuaded her. “I will take care myself mom, I just want to look for enough money to continue my study, I will do anything to rich my dream” I said to my mom while cried. My mother was defending her statement.  Day by day passed, finally my mother allowed me to get a job in abroad for two years only. “I will allow you to get a job in abroad, but two years only as a contract, then continue your study” my mother said sadly. “You can count on me mom” I said to her happily.

One mount later, I went to Malaysia with full of whishes. I became a worker in a computer soft ware company. I passed the day with full of spirit. I always remembered my mom advise to me in every step that I did. Hopefully, I could get much money and come back to my home safety. Then I could continue my study at university.  At the end of contract, I went home and fulfill my promise to my mother. I continued my study at university with my own money.

There were many experiences that I got when I become a worker in abroad and it was great experience that I have. I got many new friends, knowledge, and enough money. The important one was about struggle and responsible that I learned. I knew how difficult to get some money, as always did by my parent. Thus, I respected to my parent for everything that has given for me every time. Besides, never ever give up to rich our dream come true, because when there is a will there is a way.

ANALYZING OF THE TEXT

	“A STORY OF A GIRL WHO CATCH A DREAM”
INTRODUCTION	Three years ago in a beautiful village, lived a family who love each other. They had been living together for a long time and had two children. Their first children was me, Tika Fatmawati and their second child was Muvid Angger Frantio. Muvid was spoiled child but smart boy. While their other child, I was cranky but diligent. A beautiful girl who has many dreams and never give up to rich all the dreams.
COMPLICATION	At that time, Muvid was third grade in Elementary school and I was third grade in Senior High school. Muvid want to continue his study in a boarding school, while I wanted to continue my study at university. On other hand, our parent did not have enough money to pay the payment. As a result, Muvid continued his study at boarding school as his dream; meanwhile I stayed at home while prayed to God to give luck to my parent, so I could rich my dream to continue my study at university. I was sad, because I didn’t get what I want, but I believe that God had plan for me.
CLIMAX	One month later, I went to Malaysia with full of whishes. I became a worker in a computer soft ware company. I passed the day with full of spirit. I always remembered my mom advise to me in every step that I did.
CONCLUSION	There were many experiences that I got when I become a worker in abroad and it was great experience that I have. I got many new friends, knowledge, and enough money. The important one was about struggle and responsible that I learned. I knew how difficult to get some money, as always did by my parent. Thus, I respected to my parent for everything that has given for me every time. Besides, never ever give up to rich our dream come true, because when there is a will there is a way.

INFORMATION
PLOT	:	FORWARD PLOT
CHARACTERS	:	I, My Parents, My Young Brother, My Friends
SETTING	:	SETTING OF PLACE : Home, Indonesia, Malaysia SETTING OF TIME    : One month later,
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